As some of you know, I'm a bit of an amateur writer. I've had some success in the past, but I'm not where I need to be. So I'm working on honing my craft. I hope you will enjoy this fantasy serial called Foundation Rising. Please let me know what you think. I will continue working on it and posting more chapters if you all enjoy it. If you do not enjoy it, that's OK, too. That will be the sign that I need to try a different approach.

Part I

I changed the opening of the story completely, looking forward to any comments or critiques you all might have.

Thinking about introducing a third character next... a guy? Or does it need more chicks? LOL