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http://www.indiegogo.com/projects/288867/x/1594316?show_todos=true

It's early days yet so don't automatically dismiss it and please help sponsor for my competition, the details are on the page. It will be updated, defiantly, it's not too good at the moment i'm afraid.
Needs a fluent English editor stat.
"That is why I'm here at Kickstarter."

You might want to change that.
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OmegaX: "That is why I'm here at Kickstarter."

You might want to change that.
Thanks, my dialect can be strange for some people
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OmegaX: "That is why I'm here at Kickstarter."

You might want to change that.
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McDon: Thanks, my dialect can be strange for some people
I actually meant the word "Kickstarter", not "that".
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McDon: Thanks, my dialect can be strange for some people
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OmegaX: I actually meant the word "Kickstarter", not "that".
Oh lol xD forgot I moved it to Indiegogo never noticed thanks, StingingVelvet got me paranoid about grammer so sry :)
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OmegaX: I actually meant the word "Kickstarter", not "that".
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McDon: Oh lol xD forgot I moved it to Indiegogo never noticed thanks, StingingVelvet got me paranoid about grammer so sry :)
StingingVelvet's right. A fluent or even native english speaker would help a lot.
Especially because your asking people for money, with that many mistakes, it will put people off wanting to donate.
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McDon: Oh lol xD forgot I moved it to Indiegogo never noticed thanks, StingingVelvet got me paranoid about grammer so sry :)
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ZYZKryten: StingingVelvet's right. A fluent or even native english speaker would help a lot.
Especially because your asking people for money, with that many mistakes, it will put people off wanting to donate.
I've gone over the text and hopefully eliminated most of the bad grammar,
P.S. it's "you're" ;)
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McDon: I've gone over the text and hopefully eliminated most of the bad grammar,
P.S. it's "you're" ;)
It's not about grammar. I know your location says Ireland but the page reads exactly like someone not fluent in English wrote it. I am an ESOL teacher so I would know.
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McDon: I've gone over the text and hopefully eliminated most of the bad grammar,
P.S. it's "you're" ;)
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StingingVelvet: It's not about grammar. I know your location says Ireland but the page reads exactly like someone not fluent in English wrote it. I am an ESOL teacher so I would know.
Yeah, it's probably that Irish people have an unusual way of speaking so it probably shows in my typing, I have a habit of rushing through stuff without checking the details.
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StingingVelvet: It's not about grammar. I know your location says Ireland but the page reads exactly like someone not fluent in English wrote it.
I don't find this contradictory .... ;-)
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SimonG: I don't find this contradictory .... ;-)
I've been in Georgia too long.
Another thing, it doesn't state what exactly the product is other than it seems to be a remote buzzer or something.
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QC: Another thing, it doesn't state what exactly the product is other than it seems to be a remote buzzer or something.
At the top:
A phone cover that when activated by a remote, makes a noise to help you find it after leaving it on Silent.